Hello! I have been working on my story recently, and
I have completed chapter 2. :)
You can click here to see the first chapter. ;)
Chapter 2
My
heart was heavy as I nervously looked around the clearing.
Where was Celia? I asked myself. She was never
late, and I was beginning to worry that they
had found her.
Perhaps I should just go back. I thought. If they found out we were
trying to escape, the punishment would be horrible. They would torture us like
never before; putting fearsome thoughts in our minds and sending jolts of electricity
through our bodies.
Although
it would mean disobeying Celia, I knew that she would eventually forgive me,
but they never would.
I
decided that disobeying Celia would be better than being tortured over and over
again, and so I turned back.
“Where
do you think you’re going?” A booming voice suddenly asked.
Fear
rushed through my veins, and my heart started to thud faster and louder than
ever before. I knew I was caught.
At least they wouldn’t hurt Celia. I told myself.
Yes, but they will hurt you. Another voice said. I shook my head.
It can’t be that bad, I thought.
Nothing
can be much worse than what they’ve already done.
I
started to run. I just wanted to get away from this place, away, somewhere
they’d never find me.
I
was almost to the end of the clearing.
Almost there, I told myself. Just a little bit more, and you’ll be somewhere they’ll never ever find you. Or would they? I pushed the
negative thought into the back of my mind.
“Stop
right there!” Another voice bellowed.
I
turned and saw five of them. They
were on their black horses, and they were galloping across the clearing so
quickly that they were almost upon me.
I
suddenly skidded to a halt. The beginning and end of the forest was in front of
me. Closing my eyes, embedding this moment in my mind, savoring it, I stepped
into the safety of the trees.
For
a moment, nothing happened. But then, a blinding light was everywhere. It was
so bright I felt like I was looking directly into the sun and I was forced to close
my eyes.
Once
I was sure the light was gone, I opened them.
And
all I saw was blue.
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Far
away, in a place no one knew really existed,
a blackwing swooped down onto a low branch. In his giant beak he held a small
carved box. A very precious, very important small carved box.
The
blackwing knew that the king would be angry if he was detained, but even so,
the blackwing was so exhausted his wings were drooping.
He
had never wanted to do this job for the king, but he had been chosen for it.
And that meant he had to do it. Unless, of course, he wanted to suffer immensely.
It had taken him over a week to fly to the Dark city, and now he had to be at
the Nest in only five days.
The blackwing had received a message
from the king that if he was not back with the box in five days time, he would
suffer dire consequences when he got back.
And
so, the blackwing flew off into the mist, not knowing that he was not the only
one on that tree.
Well, I hope you enjoyed that. :)
I also have and update for CACAWC. The challenge will now end on
the 25th of December instead of the 22nd of December.
So now, if you write a chapter every week following each set of
challenges, you should have 17 chapters in your novel.
If you want, you can add a few more chapters to your story, but I just
thought I should give you a heads so you could begin to plan out your
novel a bit more. :)
If you are participating, thank you so so much. If you're not and
would like to, please visit the CACAWC page at the top of my blog. :)
Again, thank you all for everything.
Oh goodie, thank you for the update! :) Awesome story, I see a very talented author in your future. ;)
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You're a brilliant writer!:)
ReplyDeleteI love your blog, it's gorgeous!
-Lauren xoxo
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