Hold On Tight

7.3.15




Trying to hold on
To stay
To keep on being
Who I am
But my fingers 
Are slipping
Memories flood through
My last thoughts
I gaze down
There is nothing
but darkness there
This cannot be the end
And just as I
Start to let go
Accept that I will 
Fall
A hand comes and
Grabs mine
A face looks
Down at me
And smiles
It's not time for you
To go just yet
She says
And she pulls me up
Back into the world








6 comments:

  1. Lovely poem :) i'm glad it had a hopeful ending, I've been coming across sad endings a lot recently.

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    1. I agree. I definitely prefer happy endings to sad ones. Thank you for the compliment. :)

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  2. Beautiful. I love this so much. -Bethany! http://bethanysbrightlife.blogspot.com

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    1. Thank you. You have no idea how much that means to me. :)

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  3. Lovely. It reminds me of something that actually happened to me when I was younger. I nearly lost myself, but these people who soon because my best and closest friends got me back on track.

    xoxo Morning

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    1. Thank you. I'm glad that you got back on the right road. :)

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